Lives of a Brother

[knightmare13]

Hey everyone Knightmare13 here. As everyone here to some degree I'm a bit of a writer and my genres mostly deal with fiction, action, mystery and the like. But recently I have started writing a Drama story and this is my first try at a drama and thought I'd let you all take a look at it and tell me whatever you think.

Any reviews are welcome espeically constructive it only helps me.

Here's the Link:

www.fictionpress.com/s/2759010/1/The_Lives_of_a_Brother

Tell me what you guys think.

[Adam Silver]

*reads over*

Damn dude thats pretty cool, I'll be expecting more

*waits intently with gun*

=D?!